When I'm With You (1st draft)

wrote ths today. Could use some work in my opinion
When I'm With You-

Ya know I'm not the kind of girl to fall for anyone
and while I don't believe in love at first sight
it was like a flash
my whole life fell out of control
you came into my life
when I needed you the most
and I know that we just met
but man you're just so perfect
it's like you picked up all the pieces of my broken heart
and gave me the chance to go back to the start
Oh--

[chorus]
Cuz When I'm with you
it's like nothing really matters
and he's just a distant memory
and I think you know that it's true
someday we're gonna live it up
I can see us being best of friends
You brought me back to life
you showed me that there's still
liht at the end of the tunnel tonight
So don't go
you make everything feel so right
When I'm with you

You know this time I think i'm really moving on this time
Even if I haven't got your number yet
You are truely the boy of my dreams
I just gotta wait and take it slow
cuz you're the one I want, now I know
You put truth in the hopeful les I'd tell myself
Meeting you this year was a dream come true
oh---

[chorus]

Boy you make me want you
oh so bad it hurts
You exceed everything
that he never was
You've opened my eyes
I'm finally free
You have no idea
just how much you mean to me

[chorus]

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